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| Kyria-Asimi 2008-06-20 ch 8,  | abuseI as well call troll. The motion is seconded. I clicked back here realizing I once reviewed this waste of space on the internet and have come to a firm decision. You, dear Damned Soul, cannot be a real person. You are a bad joke and I will treat you as such according: no longer boosting your hit count just to stare at a train wreck that may or may not be satire. That being said, I must say this: anshient vampyre lazir bems!1!1 OMGWTFBBQ AHAHAHAHAHA! *dies laughing and holds up a "Don't feed the Troll sign"* Buh bye now! |
| hey maria 2008-02-19 ch 8, | abuse"Her teerz were lyk crystal raindrops frum a waterfall in british kolumbia." um fyi colombia iz in brazil but its ok we all make mistakez lol |
| hey maria 2008-01-28 ch 7, | abuse"cuz I lyk yogurt" I ** LOVE YOGURT OMG. I think we're soulmates. |
| A Sheep Named Booster 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abusehahaha and u think u ken write lol u kant so stfu |
| Unbeknownst 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseEven if it's satire, it's awful satire. |
| hey maria 2007-12-09 ch 6, | abuseomg ur a junyur in hi skool?? me 2!! n u wnt 2 studi vampyre and gothik litrature? me 2!! omg its lyk were twins!! dis wuz such a kute chapter i wish it wuz longr!! rite more soon kthxbye |
| Miriam Doyle 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuse"It was dark. As dark as a blak pinther att teh botom of a wel att midnite if teh pinther is eetin blakberriez n drinkin blak cofee. So it was rely dark." ...oh my god. People, please don't feed the troll. And please, for the love of bunny rabbits, leprechauns, good grammar and all things beautiful and innocent, don't get suckered by the rest of this person's 'writing'. Please don't feed the troll. Thank you. |
| hiro0911 2007-10-30 ch 5, | abuseI was kinda wondering if you're misspelling the words on purpose or perhaps English just isn't your first language or you're chatting on IM too much. I would really find this story much interesting if you were able to fix that. If you need help, I could fix it this one for you if you want - just drop me mail ~hiro |
| windy girl 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuse"It was dark. As dark as a blak pinther att teh botom of a wel att midnite if teh pinther is eetin blakberriez n drinkin blak cofee. So it was rely dark." Those three lines just totally kick **. -pb |
| LaLuneD'Argent 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThe first image was really nice... then you went and explained it. You said your friend is proofreading these for you? Well, there is an improvement, but she's not infallible--there are still a lot of problems with spelling and such. You should definitely learn the conventions of actual language... Your stories deserve better than leet and internet-speak :) They'll sound better if you fix them, too. I'll proofread them for you, if you want. I used to love writing things like this :) Fantasy is an amazing genre... |
| hey maria 2007-10-09 ch 5, | abuseomgwtf clifhangrr!!1!11!! |
| uhhh 2007-10-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm sorry, but this was so ** disturbing in so many ways I don't even know where to begin. Seriously. |
| Soulcry 2007-10-08 ch 2, | abuse@Foxy Well I say she got a good concept... but I don't like the idea of using chatspeak in fiction writing, heck I understand singlish faster than chatspeak |
| Tytherpol 2007-10-07 ch 3, | abusenow she knos hwo much he lvs herr! gr8 sene "stronge lyk a thurobred on steroydz " dats so o god! omg right Mroe kwik! |
| lovelikeamixtape 2007-10-07 ch 2, | abuseyour descriptions are really creative, definitely some things i wouldn't have thought of. |