Whoa! I love this! It is so good and the BEST thing is that it RHYMES AND doesn't lose its meaning in order to rhyme!1 Good job! ONe of the best poems I have read in a long time.

Very good! The problem I have with these types of poems (mine included) against the cliques in school is that they often degenerate in to who hates who the most, however you managed to express yourself about cliques and not needing them very well without doing that. Using a window was also, once again very good. You deserve more reviews for this _

-TheFool

I like it the window like the popular people or whatever you call them ive lost friends to that window very good job