My favorite line is "cut me into little stars and cast me into the sky". I like the title. Wonderful job!

~Twilight Starr~

This is wonderful. I would love to hear it set to music. Perhaps something similar to Laura Veirs's style. This seems like something she'd write.

I just love the first line. I think your poem is great, especially when you are describing the boy with his guitar.

The chorus is wonderful. I love how this song progresses, the easy flow of it.