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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite line is "cut me into little stars and cast me into the sky". I like the title. Wonderful job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Carnival Casualties 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful. I would love to hear it set to music. Perhaps something similar to Laura Veirs's style. This seems like something she'd write. |
| StarWonder09 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI just love the first line. I think your poem is great, especially when you are describing the boy with his guitar. |
| hey maria 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThe chorus is wonderful. I love how this song progresses, the easy flow of it. |