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Twilight Starr
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseMy favorite line is "cut me into little stars and cast me into the sky". I like the title. Wonderful job!

~Twilight Starr~
Carnival Casualties
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is wonderful. I would love to hear it set to music. Perhaps something similar to Laura Veirs's style. This seems like something she'd write.
StarWonder09
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI just love the first line. I think your poem is great, especially when you are describing the boy with his guitar.
hey maria
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseThe chorus is wonderful. I love how this song progresses, the easy flow of it.
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