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Reviews For: Shattered Lemonade

Gamer Lioness
2007-07-24
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I can definitely relate to this right now. My boyfriend and I parted ways a couple days ago, and now he's my ex (I hate that word.) We both felt it wasn't working, and I'm kind of relieved that I'm single and free again, but I still have mixed feelings about being alone once more after being with him over a year and half.

Anyway, great poem. The rhymes were very flowing and I like the overall theme. Fantastic job.
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