 OrangeRose143 2009-08-23 . chapter 4OMG I'm in love with this, too. But I kinda gagged at the sex scene in chapter 2. Dude, thats perverted. Guys keep asking me to do that to them. Anyway, are you posting a sequal to this or anything else? Because I loved the Rhuben, Jayden thing when they were teenagers. Anyway, good job! |
 rubberduckysabc 2008-08-20 . chapter 4I like this story another chapter soon please? |
 writing.life.2.4 2007-08-19 . chapter 4aw! such a cute and unexpected ending. i luv it! i still |
 Undrahas 2007-08-16 . chapter 4oh man the ending of this story was funny! man that question Cage asked almost made me scream! and what Gabe asked, i again almost screamed.
this was an awesome story and i want you to keep it up! and yeah you should do a story on Gabes life and how he lives it.
heres another idea do one on Jayden and Rhuben.
sorry, but i love that couple. |
 Katy Kitty 2007-08-16 . chapter 4Wow. Wow. Wow. I liked the story.
It was short, but thats okay. I liked the ending.
BTW, did Cage ever tell him where babies came from? |
 A Frozen Flame 2007-08-10 . chapter 4aww, that was a short story. well i hope to read more of yours. AND REVIEW MY STORY PLEASE! :* ( |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-08-10 . chapter 4THat was so freakin funny~! UPDATE! |
 writing.life.2.4 2007-08-09 . chapter 3omg! i would have never guessed! gabe's so cute! how old is he? like 2 or 3? i |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-08-07 . chapter 3OMG! UODATE! |
 Undrahas 2007-07-28 . chapter 2that was really cool! it was awesome, and i loved it! i will stick with this story! |
 aiurwaves. 2007-07-26 . chapter 2holy shit.
that was fucking awesome (excuse the language)
holy shit.
AWESOME CHAPTER!
~ Miss Deelylah Rose |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-07-26 . chapter 2To much lamon! Even though now I know they are together! UPDATE! |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Everytings workin! UPDATE! |
 aiurwaves. 2007-07-24 . chapter 1nya! so cute.
cant wait for the update
`Miss Deelylah Rose |