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OrangeRose143 2009-08-23 . chapter 4
OMG I'm in love with this, too. But I kinda gagged at the sex scene in chapter 2. Dude, thats perverted. Guys keep asking me to do that to them. Anyway, are you posting a sequal to this or anything else? Because I loved the Rhuben, Jayden thing when they were teenagers. Anyway, good job!
rubberduckysabc 2008-08-20 . chapter 4
I like this story another chapter soon please?
writing.life.2.4 2007-08-19 . chapter 4
aw! such a cute and unexpected ending. i luv it! i still
Undrahas 2007-08-16 . chapter 4
oh man the ending of this story was funny! man that question Cage asked almost made me scream! and what Gabe asked, i again almost screamed.

this was an awesome story and i want you to keep it up! and yeah you should do a story on Gabes life and how he lives it.

heres another idea do one on Jayden and Rhuben.

sorry, but i love that couple.
Katy Kitty 2007-08-16 . chapter 4
Wow. Wow. Wow. I liked the story.

It was short, but thats okay. I liked the ending.

BTW, did Cage ever tell him where babies came from?
A Frozen Flame 2007-08-10 . chapter 4
aww, that was a short story. well i hope to read more of yours. AND REVIEW MY STORY PLEASE! :* (
Fleeting Moment 2007-08-10 . chapter 4
THat was so freakin funny~! UPDATE!
writing.life.2.4 2007-08-09 . chapter 3
omg! i would have never guessed! gabe's so cute! how old is he? like 2 or 3? i
Fleeting Moment 2007-08-07 . chapter 3
OMG! UODATE!
Undrahas 2007-07-28 . chapter 2
that was really cool! it was awesome, and i loved it! i will stick with this story!
aiurwaves. 2007-07-26 . chapter 2
holy shit.

that was fucking awesome (excuse the language)

holy shit.

AWESOME CHAPTER!

~ Miss Deelylah Rose
Fleeting Moment 2007-07-26 . chapter 2
To much lamon! Even though now I know they are together! UPDATE!
Fleeting Moment 2007-07-25 . chapter 1
Everytings workin! UPDATE!
aiurwaves. 2007-07-24 . chapter 1
nya! so cute.

cant wait for the update

`Miss Deelylah Rose
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