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dawn9800 2008-02-20 ch 18,	abuseI know this is late but Im COMPLETELY LOVING this story so far!
C.F. Anne 2007-12-04 ch 21,	abuseSO SAD! but, I do undersatnd. I would prefer a good story. so...take your time, nourish your love for "Steadfast" and come back to it when you can continue a great story. (: I look forward to it.
Broken.Hockey.Stick 2007-12-03 ch 21,	abuseHey, it happens. I TOTALLY know how you feel. I was writing a story on FanFiction and I hit a wall where it was nearly finished, but I just couldn't finish it. It sat unfinished for like 2 years and then I felt so guilty for not finishing it that I forced myself to write an ending. It wasn't really fair to the readers because it wasn't a great ending, but I felt better giving it a sucky ending than leaving it forever unfinished. I hope you find new inspiration for this story sometime, but in the meantime I am hooked on Finding Grey, so it's all good. :D
white.marble.rose 2007-12-01 ch 20,	abuseI just read this story all in one go, I kept wanting to know what was going to happen next! Well done for some great writing, especially about the fighting- lots of people don't realise how much hard work is involved in handling a rifle, but your description made it real for me. I also love Eli as a character, he's so sweet. Keep up the good work!
C.F. Anne 2007-11-23 ch 20,	abusewonderful chapter! And it's understandable that you skipped so much time. A span of five years is hard to write about if you write in such detail. Like I said, great chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. (:
Broken.Hockey.Stick 2007-11-21 ch 20,	abuseI TOTALLY know where you're coming from with writer's block. It happens to the best of us. I enjoyed the chapter, even if you had to do a time jump. Sometimes it's just necessary to get where you ultimately want to go and you can only do so much filler. Looking forward for more whenever that may be, but in the meantime, I'm loving Finding Grey. :D
Saamii 2007-11-21 ch 20,	abusei'm glad someone's trying to catch little ol' eli's eye, he's too cute to keep single for so long, but what's sophie doing still hanging around jeremiah?!?!?!? but maybe you have something up your sleeve with them. i hate american wars for the simple fact that they are so boring, even during times of actions, not that any other war isn't that way. after a while, manoevers and strategies can only hold you interest for so long before your eyes start to cross. oh well, such is history. i'm liking the chapter.
euphorictragedy 2007-11-21 ch 20,	abuseWell, I'm glad he's feeling better but that stupid nurse better not be getting any ideas in her head. Eli belongs to Sophie, end of story. Please update soon!
Brackynn 2007-11-19 ch 19,	abuseI really like the fact that you're not sugar-coating the war at all and do make mention that soldiers on both sides are dying -- the mortar exploding and killing some of the soldiers in Eli and Nate's regiment was a real blow for me. Eli's right -- it does seem like such a tragic waste. I'm glad that he and Nate got their differences out in the open, though, and I'm glad to hear that Nate is trigger-happy for a reason. However, I really do think that this scene had so much potential to be really moving and great for character development if their entire conversation was written in full instead of summarised. But I feel so sorry for Eli ... the way he signed off his letter almost broke my heart -- "Your second favorite soldier." grumbles about silly Sophie and Jeremiah
euphorictragedy 2007-11-11 ch 19,	abuseI noticed there are only 50 reviews for this whole story so far. That's ridiculous! This story deserves much more credit than that. Anywho, I really enjoyed this chapter. Eli is such a sweetie... I hope he survives the war. Please update soon!
Broken.Hockey.Stick 2007-11-10 ch 19,	abuseIt was nice to have an update on the boys. Good to know Nate feels bad for killing people too, I was little concerned about his behavior. I totally see Eli's viewpoint though...how can you go from disagreeing over something with a group of people to trying to kill them all? Especially in the Civil War when it was your own countrymen. I'm glad that I am not a man and I am not in the military. I admire those who are for what they do because I know I couldn't hack it. Great chapter, good luck with the next one whenever it may come.
Broken.Hockey.Stick 2007-11-04 ch 18,	abuseOh I knew something was up when Jeremiah was stiff during his introduction to Essie. It's sad that he feels the way he does, but hey if Sophie doesn't like him, I can get my hopes back up about Eli. Hehe. Great chapter, and I'll be looking forward to more of an update on the boys. Although I'll admit I can't help but feeling something ominous is looming...
C.F. Anne 2007-11-04 ch 18,	abuseI must say, very nice work! (: Too bad Jermiah had to make that comment! But Eli's still there. Post soon!
Saamii 2007-11-03 ch 18,	abusei knew it, i knew this was going to be what did him in. i was wondering how you were going to burst mr. wonderful's bubble, and then it hit me and i was right. if there wasn't eli waiting in the wings, i would be ** that you made jeremiah such a prick, but eli's still here and still perfect, so she'll end up with the right dude. good job putting in a fight since things were seeming a little stepford wife-ish. good chapter.
euphorictragedy 2007-11-03 ch 18, anon.	abuseI love this story so far. Really, it's great. And why does Sophie have to keep grabbing the attention of so many males? Her and Eli belong together, even though I do like Jeremiah as well. Although that comment he made about Essie made him lose some brownie points. Which is good since I won't have some internal conflict over Eli and Jeremiah. Anyway, please update soon! I want to know how Eli and Nate are doing and will Eli ever tell Sophie how he feels?

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