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| miss-blackhair 2007-11-29 ch 2, | abusewhoa i didnt really like the feeling this story gave me. it made me feel uneasy, like a CSI mystery unsolved. its really interesting and deep. but i like your style of writing. very convincing and easily allows the reader to be driven deep into the story. good job! |
| eternalfreedom 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseFine writing, dahling, very fine. :-D And I love how she keeps insisting that he is, in fact, DEAD! |