dis pome is so l33t.

i lik3 teh lien.s

"uneskapabil
horificck
doohm surundz us al
Itz a canvi5 of deyspar"

Especially the canvi5 of deyspar?

Never get a proofreader ever! :)

omg ur so gud

you shuld rite moar like this ok?1?11?

Pane? I think you mean Pain. By which I mean this poem inflicts much pain on all writers on this site who's literature gets less attention than this poorly written, chatspeak-written poem.

I, along with many others, offer my services as an editor.

I also wish to tell you of a wonderful thing- the spellcheck. It's a common tool used by writers to check their work for mistakes. I reccomend you use it... a lot.

M

I'd like the poem more I could understand it! This isn't a flame so please don't take it as one!

Well I've been reading through a few of your works and well I think you should just maybe take up peoples offer to proof read your work for you..*cough*All Alone With Her Thoughts*cough*

Other than that I think you have what it takes to be a very good writer or author ..emm.. well I hope you don't take this the wrong way and just worrk harder on spelling okay?

^/^

As I've told you, you have good ideas and everything. But, I really suggest getting a beta. It prevents flames. Or a ABC check (aka spell check). I offer to be you beta and help you out with writing and poems. All you have to do is PM me. ^-^ I'd do it gladly for you!

Look, I've offered before. Would you like me to edit your poems because oviously you are incapible of using spell-check?

Rowan.

omfg dis is incredable!!1!!11 i luv de repepetishion u shud use it moar, i tink its so cool

this would be a good poem if it wasn't written in "l33t" or whatever ridiculous thing you tried to write it in
no one will ever take you seriously if you can not spell