Reviews for The End of Sanity

angel953 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot. The idea is interesting too. AS you said about the haiku, I'm not much of a song writer so I don't think I could criticize this fairly if I could even find something to criticize. This is really good though.
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseWow...i really don't usually look at songs on fictionpress but this is really good! when i was reading it i sort of imagined it being sung a bit Linkin Park or Three Days Grace-like.
Twilight Starr 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseAwesome song. Good luck with songwriting and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~
soojinyeh 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is good-are you recording this? cause I'm a musician myself, and I'd love to be a part of this song- sing the hook or something, write for it, do a remix, etc.
Dani P 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abusewell i like the chorus its pretty good...however its not really a song if it has only 2 verses and a chorus. you need to add some verses and a bridge and everything. you have a nice idea just try and expand it.
alirider827 2007-07-24 ch 1,	abusethis is pretty depressing... while i don't agree with your message, the message portrayed is very strong. you wrote what you're saying very powerfully. and you evoke a lot of emotion. this does seems sort of short though. where is the separation of chorus from verse? that might clear things up a little. all in all, this was very well-written. nice job.