Aw :) This is cute. Very well written; I especially thought the character of Kaylee was well established. Ermm, not much to say for constructive criticism really, it was just really good :) x

Yay! The last bit makes me happy. =) I also enjoyed the author's note, haha =P very cute story!!

Lyke omg ur story is so gud. Haha just kidding, I hate people who write like that. I've been kinda surfing the stories in this category and your's was the only one I actually liked. It made me laughed and the way your characters talked, it sounded like my friends. Kudos.

aww...that was CUTE! anyways. I really liked the character descriptions and the dialogue was realistic so overall it was really good! great job!

bec