Gah...
Was written well enough to remind me of the last time I got dumped... dangit.

Quite a good read overall, definitely fits with the 'angst' labeling. Grammatically accurate enough that I couldn't point out anything wrong in my first read over- so if not perfect, at least good enough for me to not notice otherwise.

I'mma go slump into a pool of festering despair now- b'bye.

Wow! i love it!

It's just so descriptive and i like the way you described how much she cared for him! =]

And i'm just itching to know why he left her!! ahh!
i guess that shall be left to my imagination! lol (*ponders*)

Hm. lol but anyways great job! =P keep it up!

~RL~