Reviews for Final Victory - FictionPress.com

errorlieshere 2007-07-31 ch 1,	hahaha, i read the whole thing before reading your little note at the beginning. that's great. well for a totally random write, it's fun enough. if you wanted to you could really polish it up but i'm not gonna bother with any advice unless you really want me to.
Fractured Illusion 2007-07-26 ch 1,	"overwhelm my senses." overwhelming seems to fit better This despite its shortness efficiently tells of the world and the relations in this story. It was a nice read, though I wonder, if he knew he was a spy, why did he not say anything?