 Menadoa 2007-08-11 . chapter 1I'm review happy today. :-)
Very good poem. Well written & good descriptions. Except that after reading all the beautifully worded-descriptions, like "audacious but endearing candor" and then reading "it's just my best friend." It just seems like someone greeting the Queen with "Yo. What it do?"
Maybe a nicer version of "it's just my best friend" would go better. Or you could totally just screw my review (haha that kinda rhymed) and just stick with it. :-) |