love this story! wish you'd continue...please?

having a shoe obsession sounds fun...i wish i could wear heels...*pout* i have size 11 feet and get vertigo *runs away crying*
Oh awesomely funny story by the way!!

I, sadly, will never know the joys of high heeled shoes because my feet are womens size 11- or 42 in european measuring thingo. I have to go shoe shopping in the mens section for runners. But just because I am denied the pleasure of having nice shoes doesn't mean that I can't enjoy this story. I love it to pieces: the way you write is quirky and funny, and Maddie's "hobby" ("it's a hobby, not an addiction") makes the story even funnier. Characters are great and I can't wait to see how this all plays out.

Lovely update. I wish you would go back to Maddie's perspective. It's more spontaneous and girly. No offense. Please update soon.

lol, I love this girl. First she steals his coffee, which is grounds for homocide as it is, then she sniffs his hair. Amazing. And she hadn't even known his name for an hour.

So, when does he kill her? lol

Awesome story! hope to read more soon

lol. its a funny story. i cant wait to see how its going to go from here!

Heh. Stilettos are fun. *pats author on back* Maybe it helps if you don't divide them into chapters until after you've written them. My writing also has a tendency to seem disconnected to me, but nobody else notices. *shrugs* If you're getting bored, injure someone. One of your characters(you didn't think I meant a real-life someone, did you?) being rushed to ER can spark a host of ideas. Or if you kill them. How would you resurrect Teddy if he died? Would he be a ghost? The Trousers of Time open up before you... (Terry Pratchett reference) Thanks!

Lilz

i liked it. i would have a more articulate review but this britney spears "heaven on earth" song is messing up my brain waves. [i have no idea why its playing on my computer and it wont stop either. >0( ]

short. bery short. BUT witty nonetheless.

haha poor Sean but serves him right. Tho i think Maddie should get her revenge on them soon. Update soon

hi. Plz update soon

Eh, it took me a bit to figure out whose POV it was. (Hint to Teddy: Say they bribed and/or threatened you. Those three-inch stilettos *hurt* when you're being stabbed with them.)

And the being easier to write from a boy's POV thing: I've always thought when I write from a guy's perspective he'd sound like a girl, but someone told me they were fairly sure the character-whose-gender-was-not-decided-on was a guy. Which was weird, because I was writing what I would be like in their situation... (And I'm not sure if it's POSSIBLE for me to be mistaken for a guy. In real life, that is.) *blinks* I just commented three times as much on the author's note as on the actual chapter... Eh, I have homework begging to get done. Actually, my mother's threatening me to get it done. So I shall stop here. Thanks!

Lilz

oh...some action! finally. The chapters are kind of short though, but they're good.

Change of POV, Halloween theme, development in the plot--awesome!

I wouldn't really think Gabe would mess with Maddie like that, but maybe I've forgotten since I last read... Oh, well.

Making someone faint is Not Cool. That could be dangerous. There will be repercussions for these boys, muchos repercussion in the future--*rubs hands together eagerly/evilly*