 Catalan' 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Katia (what a lovely pen name). Anyway, I read constantly. All kinds of books and stories and I must say that this story had the mark of a good one, i.e.,I didn't want to stop reading until I knew how it ended. It has pathos, sweetness, and a happy ending. Very nice in the way you presented the unlikely hero. Good job. I hope you're able to develop your talents further. |
 Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-25 . chapter 1Adorable. :D The narration was great. |
 Kindre Turnany 2007-07-25 . chapter 1I applaud you, because I can, and I'd say you deserve it. There were a few points where things got a bit rough stylistically (though I can't remember where they were), but overall, this was great. |
 The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-07-25 . chapter 1This was great! I liked how you described the farmer, how he lived and what he longed for. Your words were beautiful, and the message was well-written. I liked how you wrote the relationship between the prince and the farmer. This will go in my favorites! Hope to see more from you soon!
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 AuraBorealis 2007-07-25 . chapter 1that was different from the normal writing. great work |
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