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| Elyanna Night 2008-08-12 ch 15,  | abuseoh, thank GODS it's not over! you have to get them together BEFORE she's 18, then have them get caught! that'd be exciting! i haven't read one of those before! they've all been mushy happy endings where the girl grows up and marries her teach'. BE UNIQUE! UPDATE SOON! ~Elyn |
| Justagirl9311 2008-05-21 ch 15, | abuseAw I love this story, I wish you'd update it! I really really really love it! |
| Phantom'sLuv 2008-03-13 ch 15, | abuseWow, this was an AMAZING chapter. Please tell me you'll update again, please? Its so good! ~Phantom'sLuv |
| crazy4thesun 2007-11-13 ch 15, | abuseGreat story so far. Some advice... Try not to have so much about religion in the story, or else post a warning in the summary that it contains religious content, because not everyone believes in God and you don't want to offend the ones who don't. Anyways, i love your story, can't wait to find out what happens between them next. Story is being added to favorites! |
| Spirella 2007-11-10 ch 15, | abuseI love reading all the different versions of stories you've written about Rose and Dan. They're strangely addictive and I'm working my way through them. It's strange that somehow, they all end up being very different, whilst staying true to the characters you've created. You're an amazing writer. Keep it up! |
| Young Love 2007-11-05 ch 15, | abuseis this the last chapter? |
| grapejuice65 2007-11-04 ch 15, | abusei love this story! its absolutely wonderful and i cant wait for the next chapter!! |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-11-01 ch 15, | abusenormally i'd just add this to my story alert and not comment, but i LOVE this story! hehe. this last chapter just blew me away, seriously. you're an awesome writer, and this deserves so many more reviews. i really, really hope you update soon, 'cause i want to know what happens between them. =) -lqd |
| StrawberryKisses08 2007-11-01 ch 15, | abuseSorry for not replying before...it was getting really tense and I was waiting for this chapter so I could comment on what I think. I think...wow. Amazingly written |
| under the influence 2007-11-01 ch 15, | abuse"Hands to Heaven" is one of my favorite 80's songs! It'll be interesting to see how they act at school. I think it's rather obvious that you have readers... |
| Lady Knight 1512 2007-10-31 ch 15, | abuseThis chapter would never have happened in the light of day. Daylight causes people to see things differently, and Dan would never have let this happen. He would have thought things through, not been easily swayed; he would have acted responsibly. But it's NOT daytime. It's night, which often makes people do crazy things. That's what i love so much about your characters. They're human, and whether you intend them to be or not, their actions and the consequences are realistic. What a bittersweet chapter this was though. So sad. An end before a beginning. It was almost like a dream. It'll probably seem like that to Bekah when she wakes up the next morning. Night does that to people too. You are most definitely NOT writing for just yourself. You're writing for me too, and a whole lot of other fans. I can't wait to see how you follow up this chapter. Update soon please. ~Marie |
| Gazeller 2007-10-31 ch 15, | abuseahh wow your amazing at writing. i love this so much and e it finnally happend!! haha i soo cant wait for the next one. sorry i dont have that deep of a feedback. but tis story captures me and yeah. totally cant wait |
| under the influence 2007-10-30 ch 11, | abuseargh! it was a dream... |
| under the influence 2007-10-30 ch 10, | abuseI don't think the emails seem forced... |
| under the influence 2007-10-30 ch 9, | abusesappy report, but it was nice to see that she took the assignment seriously, even though he said he wasn't going to grade it |