Wow. Yes, it was sad and tragic, but it's so realistic. Very well written. The feelings and emotions ooze out of the paragraphs, it's quite amazing actually.

I liked this piece a lot. Especially the part about sitting outside the cafe in the cold. I don't know why, but that struck a chord in me. I like Autumn. Perhaps that is why.

What was she going to tell?? Hm?

Wonderful as always. I don't know how you do it, really... *in awe*

That was...-so good-. God, my eyes are even a little watery. The way you described loss was simply perfect.

this is a simply wonderful piece. Especially the last part. Omg, I could've cried lol. Amazing work, keep it up! This is def. going in my favs.
Faith