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someone's sideshow
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseI'm evil.
I'm a sucker for unsettling endings.
But I like this one. I think the watch is a great symbol. I suck at symbolism. You should teach me.

And what else I was realizing, is that I didn't mention who I was in my last review.

I am your lifelong friend.
Lady Rainwind
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseMy favorite part is the last line. Thanks for posting!
Fractured Illusion
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseAww, she (because I am assuming it is a she) has moved on. This was also very beautiful. I like the insertion of her watch and how she bought a new one. Well played with all elements!

You're talented!
Queen Anabella
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI love the prose and the way you form phrases.
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