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| someone's sideshow 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm evil. I'm a sucker for unsettling endings. But I like this one. I think the watch is a great symbol. I suck at symbolism. You should teach me. And what else I was realizing, is that I didn't mention who I was in my last review. I am your lifelong friend. |
| Lady Rainwind 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite part is the last line. Thanks for posting! |
| Fractured Illusion 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAww, she (because I am assuming it is a she) has moved on. This was also very beautiful. I like the insertion of her watch and how she bought a new one. Well played with all elements! You're talented! |
| Queen Anabella 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the prose and the way you form phrases. |