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| SkaterGurl08 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. I can actually relate to this in a way. |
| Mosaic Stains 2007-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeartfelt and evocative words. They express in short how you feel and how you're there. I like that you are offering a hand to comfort her and be there as best as you can. Everyone needs that sort of help and comfort every once in a while, and when we least expect it it's best. I especially like your line: Come out of the rain, learn to stand again! I thought was one of the more evocative lines you put. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abusereminds me of the times i discuss my friend's love life. move on, forget him... but they hardly listen, do they? keep writing |
| Thrice 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. Simple yet heart-felt. You still rock with the wordplay. |