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Reviews For: Giving you a hand

SkaterGurl08
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseNice poem. I can actually relate to this in a way.
Mosaic Stains
2007-08-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeartfelt and evocative words. They express in short how you feel and how you're there. I like that you are offering a hand to comfort her and be there as best as you can. Everyone needs that sort of help and comfort every once in a while, and when we least expect it it's best.

I especially like your line:

Come out of the rain, learn to stand again!

I thought was one of the more evocative lines you put.
mizu no kokoro
2007-08-16
ch 1,
abusereminds me of the times i discuss my friend's love life.
move on, forget him...
but they hardly listen, do they?

keep writing
Thrice
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseNicely done. Simple yet heart-felt. You still rock with the wordplay.
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