 Element Goddess 2008-02-25 . chapter 1awesome story... i really really like it.. soo adorabuble! Good job! |
 ihrtbks 2007-09-05 . chapter 1*squeal* That was adorable! I like how you keep on making Jacob blush so much...I think it's cute. And the second to last part about her being glad about detention...priceless. And the repetitive butterflies thing was cute as well.
KEEP IT UP! |
 Always Pencil 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Oh my gosh. That was a good story. I really enjoyed it. |
 TwinkleHeart 2007-07-26 . chapter 1aw |
 scrtshdfgry 2007-07-26 . chapter 1a little fast, but overall, very good :) |
 dreamer 2007-07-26 . chapter 1 really sweet! well written and one of my favourite one shots |
 PaintSunshine 2007-07-26 . chapter 1a little fast but i figured it's a one-shot.
It's so sweet. :)
I'm def saving it. It's fantastic. :D |
 Back of Beyond 2007-07-26 . chapter 1Well, that's got to be the first het story I've read in a while! But it was good anyway ^^ Very short and sweet |