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| emilyclaire 2007-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseA good, clear start with an interesting title character. I'll be interested to see where it goes... |
| Great-Enchantress 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting story so far! I love Adella, she seems like a very exciting heroine to this story and Garrett doesn't seem as though he's telling Adella all to why he has to leave so fast. Though I don't think he's up to no good as her aunt might say, I know there's something fishy! I can't wait to read more of this, it seems really cool so far! -GE |