Nicely written.I can totally relate.

Hey this reminds me of evanescence my immortal anyways its really good and even togh its sad its very thoughful and emotionally provoking. well done on you! ^^
I was wondering if youd read and oppinionate my poem (utter complete rubbish) its weird and supposed to be amusing but people so far have only been mean but yeah..if u could it be really cool!^^

Aw, that's really sad. But I can relate. Pretty. Descriptive. Good work. =]

Wow this is really good. I like your structure too. its very unique. I can't wait to read more ^^