Reviews for The Pointless Quest of a Butterfly Warrior

Reviews For: The Pointless Quest of a Butterfly Warrior

woodland.goddess 2007-09-03 ch 4,	Hm. I'd thought that this was a one-shot. Apparently I was wrong. I'm not sure what to think of this; it's insane, and I'm completely confused, but at the same time, the story is rather endearing. I like that the story moves at a quick pace, and that both the diologue and the narrative is humourous. However, I think that doing a more thorough grammar and spell check would really benefit the story and help make it that much better. I also think you should consider introducing some background information on the setting and characters. It might make the story a bit easier to understand. I think that, for what you're trying to do with the story, you're doing a good job. It's a lot of fun to read, and I loved the description of the battle sequence. Keep writing.
Inarra Lake 2007-08-28 ch 3,	It's too random for me. It could work as a crazy random thing, but if you wanted it to be a good story, it would need more of a plot and some backstory. I'm still going to look at your other stuff though, I hope for good things!
woodland.goddess 2007-07-28 ch 1,	This is wonderful. It was the exact opposite of what I excpected. I thought it woud be a story about a butterfly warrior, not a humourous, diologue driven story. That said, I like that this is all diologue, and that the speakers are never named. Even without names you can see their personalities. I also think the entire concept is just, very humourous and original. I love the coincidental events, like the rustling, and of course the butterfly warrior. Lol, butterfly warrior. That in itself is just brilliant.

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