I admire your choice in words, and how you put them all together. One thing I noticed though, if he is living alone, why is he in high school? It may not be high school, but that it what I assumed since there was nothing else to tell me other wise.

OMG! Lee, That was very good ... I always knew you had a way with words, jajaja! Anyway take care Cuz. ♥ *hugs*

Ooh, I've never read a story about an incubus before! Well, a good one, that is. This one has great potential with its beginning and I love it! Even though it's so soon, you've already given us a clear picture of your main character through his actions and thoughts. Wonderful. And your imagery is great! I'm going to put this on my alerts list... and I don't do that very often, seeing as how I don't have a lot of patience to read things, lol.