Another great poem. The thing I like about your poems are that they are poetic, but contain a story in it as well. This was a very dark tale and you pulled it off well.

It was kinda nice but really really sad. Smile. ] God will get you through it sometime. Although I like it, I think you should write another that describes what happened to make the girl sad. If it's loneliness, just describe her day at school. Let the emotion come from that. I like that you tell me what she does afterwards but what about the thing that caused her to start? That's just me. Awaiting the sequel... ]

googd work. poor child