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| concerto49 2007-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseHm, yes I once read something about invisible - and it just meant being neglicted by society and you seem invisible to this world. It is angst, and a little sad. Cheers, guess we all have our experiences. Perhaps it's just that you haven't met the particular one that would change you. Don't give up! |
| Alexandria Smith 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Much better than the version we wrote. Hahaha... yeah, I wrote some pretty gay lines in this song... good job on revising this! Your simply amazing. [like you haven't heard that before!] ;) hehe |
| Guardrail 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! The last lines really hit home and I can feel the emotion in this piece. Great work, this is so well done. Keep writing! |