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| Prieda Solo 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseaw. I do like the style here, the little brackets make it all seem quite dreamy. there's an atmosphere of afternoons, of laziness, of the sun streaming through a window and one of those annoying fly-things buzzing just out of reach. Very sweet as well. =D |
| Ki 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseBaw! Why was I not told about one-shots being published? I must start checking your profile more often! Raoul is my favourite male name in the whole world. Also, I love your female characters wildly. Scatter-brained genius. =D I like the format - story-telling, and the abstract present-time ... what do you call Him? The addressee? I like it. YES. Kindly continue writing everything! I am still itching over the Caspiren story. |
| catseye348 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseah! cute! |
| Totally Raven 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat ending is so - effing - cute... Awesome work as usual. And I liked the sryle. I dunno how you pull it off, love. |
| JessieJean 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseYay, you updated! Great story, great story. I love how you decided to narrate it in that first-person style. Very clever. I hope you finished some of those writings and update lots soon! |
| SpawnMeister666 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this, very well written... No complaints from me about style or anything else with it Spawny |