aw. I do like the style here, the little brackets make it all seem quite dreamy. there's an atmosphere of afternoons, of laziness, of the sun streaming through a window and one of those annoying fly-things buzzing just out of reach.

Very sweet as well. D

Baw!

Why was I not told about one-shots being published? I must start checking your profile more often!

Raoul is my favourite male name in the whole world. Also, I love your female characters wildly. Scatter-brained genius. D

I like the format - story-telling, and the abstract present-time ... what do you call Him? The addressee? I like it.

YES.

Kindly continue writing everything! I am still itching over the Caspiren story.

ah! cute!

That ending is so - effing - cute...

Awesome work as usual. And I liked the sryle. I dunno how you pull it off, love.

Yay, you updated! Great story, great story. I love how you decided to narrate it in that first-person style. Very clever. I hope you finished some of those writings and update lots soon!

I like this, very well written...

No complaints from me about style or anything else with it

Spawny