I don't think I've ever read a single poem about someone who tried to cut themselves then kill themselves, but were happy they didn't. Nice job with this, your descriptions made me imagine that I was cutting myself..

This is really good. There is alot stronger feeling, more...I don't know, real, or complicated, then most of your other work. The flow seems to have become a little wavered at the end, and thats okay but if it stayed more solid this would be even more fantastic then it already is.

Hm. Well at least the person had a chance to save them self. You know what would suck? If you jumped from a bridge, only to realize you didn't want to die, but it was too late. Hm. Maybe I write a poem about that. *sigh* Such random ideas...lol

made me cry. i can relate, my freind tried killing herself. very deep. good work

I loved this. )

Been here to a point. Not fully.

*adds to favs*

it's beautiful/horrile/heartbreaking/hopeful. i liked it. one thing though, you spelled vein wrong. vain is like vanity. vein is the one in your wrist with the blood.