|Reviews for My Almost Suicide|
| Heroh 8/21/07 . chapter 1
I don't think I've ever read a single poem about someone who tried to cut themselves then kill themselves, but were happy they didn't. Nice job with this, your descriptions made me imagine that I was cutting myself..
| WildDeamonChild 8/4/07 . chapter 1
This is really good. There is alot stronger feeling, more...I don't know, real, or complicated, then most of your other work. The flow seems to have become a little wavered at the end, and thats okay but if it stayed more solid this would be even more fantastic then it already is.
| The Candle Thief 7/26/07 . chapter 1
Hm. Well at least the person had a chance to save them self. You know what would suck? If you jumped from a bridge, only to realize you didn't want to die, but it was too late. Hm. Maybe I write a poem about that. *sigh* Such random ideas...lol
| AuraBorealis 7/26/07 . chapter 1
made me cry. i can relate, my freind tried killing herself. very deep. good work
| smile for the sunshine 7/26/07 . chapter 1
I loved this. )
Been here to a point. Not fully.
*adds to favs*
| whispered something profound 7/26/07 . chapter 1
it's beautiful/horrile/heartbreaking/hopeful. i liked it. one thing though, you spelled vein wrong. vain is like vanity. vein is the one in your wrist with the blood.