very true

very good. keep writing

I like it, and I'd like it a lot more if it was poetry, art, culture or anything along those lines instead of rock and roll. But that's probably just me.
I'd finish with something encouraging, but the only things that come to mind seem overdone.

sorry, this is utterly random and off topic but my parents are getting me into Blade Runner. I'll review the actual story later, I didn't read it i just felt I shouyld tell you that.

Peace, I'm sure the story is good.