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Onira 2009-11-07 . chapter 31
Hi there, long time fan, first time reviewer. I just have to say that I really liked this story. I absolutely love the Han family, especially Isabella. I did not expect the lesbian twist, but I liked it. I did not like Jason, at all, all though it is nice that he matured to the point that they lived happily ever after.

Keep up the good work!! (And don't forget to write more fanfiction!!)
Possible-Gooding 2009-10-13 . chapter 30
Starving,

Nice Chapter, I like seeing that Isabel may just be getting her life togethor. Now, I still don't like Jason, but what can you do eh? At least he seems hellbent on not being a complete dick.

I look forwards to the end,

Your fan,
PG
Possible-Gooding 2009-08-21 . chapter 29
Starving,

hm, I have mixed feelings about this chapter. I loved the part with her showing the mob down, though it was an incredibly pathetic attempt by someone who had seen her in action, it seemed sloppy of him.

As to the break up, well- I liked her, but Jasmine was a brat, but I really don't want to see this end with Jason (Though he is slightly less of an ass now then in other books)

Maybe bring Kane in? Ah, that is just wishful thinking on my part.

Whatever you do, I'm sure it'll be good.

Your Fan,
PG
Rachel 2009-08-19 . chapter 29
Ugh.
No more Jasmine?

Well, that definitely sucks.
Thats kind of one of the reasons why i'm keeping up with this story.

D:
Possible-Gooding 2009-08-07 . chapter 28
Starving,

Well, not much for me to say but I simply love The Han family. Sometimes Kat gets annoying, but I think that is intentional.

Jasmine now... hm, she is an interesting one. I am just worried how the father will react when (not if) he finds out.

Jason is worrying me as well. He seems to be getting nostalgic. The last time he was like this, it was in Something's Gotta give, and he screwed up Hadrian.

While I doubt he'll be able to woo Cassandra, he proably will cause problems or Isabel/Jasmine.

Will he be the one who tells Jasmine's Father?

Very good story so far,
PG
Leanna 2009-08-05 . chapter 28
Oh my gosh.
I pray that Isabel does not go back to Jason..
I will cry I actually like Jasmine even if she is alittle whiney.
Maria 2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Can't wait for the last few chapters for this story!

:D
Tenchi Knight 2009-07-12 . chapter 27
Dating a woman with a kid or a man with a kid, it doesn't matter. You've got to accept you're gonna be second fiddle part of the time and deal with it, especially when you're talking about a Han.

And getting Izzy, Cue, Kat, and Tee in the same room sounds like the making of WWI or one hell of a party... probably both...

I wonder what Jason's gonna realize and if he's gonna be smart (and mature) enough to actually implement it...

Bring on the chapters! =^_^=
TK
Shthar 2009-06-10 . chapter 25
"She was watching cartoons on the living room floor"

Now that's a good title for a song!
krugerfan18 2009-05-25 . chapter 24
I think that jasmine is a much better match for Isabel personally. the sooner she get's rid of Jason the better. I liked this chapter a lot
kugerfan18 2009-04-27 . chapter 22
I fucking love Isabel she's the best and this chapter was really funny I can imagine people fainting at the sound of her name ha ha ha .
kugerfan18 2009-04-10 . chapter 21
always the loyal fan of most of your work this chapter was great i expected nothing less from Isabel post soon.your work is great
Cinnamon-sama 2008-12-16 . chapter 17
ISABELLA ROCKS!

Whoo... hoo! That was one heck of a fight!

Well choreographed, StarvingLunatic. I actually found myself blocking punches while reading and bobbin' and weavin' (LOL).

Great Job!
Cinnamon-sama 2008-12-16 . chapter 16
Whew! Intense chapter and the fight scenes were incredibly graphic. I agree... Isabel is the "beast"; she's kickin' a** and takin' names.

**Sighs** Yet again, Jason makes no headway with Isabel, the family or his daughter. I seriously don't know if the guy should attempt to board the love boat or maybe jump ship (LOL).

Wel... we'll see what the naext chapter brings. Sorry for the late review!
Cinnamon-sama 2008-09-10 . chapter 15
Hot, hot, hot chapter... however, I'm not quite sure how I feel about it. Call me a prude, but I'm about fifty-fifty with Jason. As a martial artist myself, I loved the tournament, but for children, it was a bit "too" rough. Looking forward to the women fighting though - now... they can go all out.

Til next chapter and sorry for the late review!
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