Damn you! ;__; Dark, stop writing things that don't say enough in the first chapter. It isn't fair. Especially not, given that you take forever to post new chapters.

Looking very much forward to seeing what happens next.

A little confusing as it switches between Teri and Madison. Nevertheless, it's really enjoyable so far! Keep up the good work. :)

The title IS a little misleading, but I enjoyed it all the same.

The characters are looking interesting so far and I like how I can imagine this. I know I've said this before, but I can see this being a real live book.

I could never write like this. I don't think the final 3 in the current contest could write this!

Hm, the characters are intriguing and I'd like to know more about them, but I feel that in this piece you focus too much on what they are doing rather than their thoughts and reasoning, which made it sound monotonous in parts. The transitions between the characters was sometimes confusing as well.

Nonetheless it has a nice set up and it sounds like you have this at least a bit fleshed out.