there are so many fake people in the world these day

but anyways nice poem.

b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.

many teen girls need to read this.

This is quite good, but could be improved. The fourth line does not rhyme while the others do. Lines five and seven both end with the word 'inside', which loses its impact when used twice like that. Otherwise, good job.

Powerful stuff. I think i need to hear more of this stuff it look you see what the world is really like when everybody turns a blind eye to it.