|Reviews for Footprints in my Skin|
| inxyourxeyes 10/25/07 . chapter 1
I really love your use of the extended metaphor of the footprints in your skin. Something most people can relate to, directly and indirectly.
However...I do not liek your use of the word "stuff", it breaks the poetic flow of the story.
| AuraBorealis 8/4/07 . chapter 1
very good. like always
| phantom66 7/27/07 . chapter 1
once again...great work!
| whispered something profound 7/27/07 . chapter 1
this one's really good too.