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| changed.by.an.afterthought 2007-08-11 ch 1,  | abusegreat poem. i like the simplicity of it and how u broke apart the words so it seemed strained and depressed...yet curious at the same time...great job. - changed |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG i miss Zach and Josh so much! they were my best friends, my group... god... i think about them all the time and i ask myself the same things. i saw Zach ((i think it was him)) last summer at the CCHS vs. LHS football game... he was just there in the bleachers, and Dennis pointed him out to me. The last time i saw Josh was a wicked long time ago... i was at Market Basket with my mom, and we were leaving, and i thought i heard someone calling my name, but i didnt see anyone i knew, so i thought i was imagining it. we got in the car and we driving away and i saw him, watching us, screaming my name and waving. and i cried because my mom wouldnt turn around and go back. i feel so guilty all the time for not seeing him the first time. okay, enough dwelling on old memories, i'm gonna make myself cry. ~Black and White Dreams~ |