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| Kaiyako Kagami 2008-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseHey! Well, I like the story idea you have. But, to be honest your characters are a bit obvious, I mean you have the popular girl that everyone wants, and the typical nerds, but despite this I actually think you can make this story work. Good Luck! Kaiyako K. |
| Black and White Dreams 2008-01-23 ch 5, | abuseAW thats so cute. lol i love zoe, why did you kill her? |
| Black and White Dreams 2008-01-23 ch 3, | abuseZOE! NO! WHY!? ::sobs:: you meanie! you killed zoe! |
| AuraBorealis 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abusegood work. keep writing |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! A couple of grammatical errors, but other than that I liked it. Oh my gosh, Zoe's so much like me, with the whole academically-obsessed. Keep on going. |
| The Hawks Reject 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuselol...looks like a real Chick FLik, so far its good...keep going and try tio add some info Keep going, and thx for the reviews! |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abusehahaha! Lo-Rock?? Kate S.? hahaha did Kate by any chance read this? Well... it ended sort of suddenly... there really wasnt any story there. i hope to god you plan on coninuing this because it could be a really great story. ~Black and White Dreams~ |