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| arirang 2008-05-18 ch 8, anon. | abuseAh, I don't think I've mentioned this before, but I love the women. They kick arse, seriously. And I really hope Ana Maria doesn't get busted because right now, she's one of my favorite characters. =] Update soon, you know you want to. |
| arirang 2008-04-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseSorry it's been such a long time - life caught up with me. Anyhow, I had to read everything over again, but it just got better. For one thing, it's exciting now that the characters are starting to meet and stuff. For another, the mystery plot itself is just getting more and more intriguing. (By the way, I love Van. He's amazing for a kid.) I think this deserves more reviews. It's well-written and well thought out. Update soon, and I'll try to review more regularly, =] |
| makexmexspin 2008-01-03 ch 5,  | abusei like this chapter too. but where are you going with all of this? is going to be that they all are somehow tied together? or something like that? |
| emrevolemina 2007-12-19 ch 5, | abuseI pity his wife |
| makexmexspin 2007-12-07 ch 4, | abuse3 chapters worth of god brootal writing. |
| makexmexspin 2007-12-07 ch 3, | abusei don't understand why people don't review for this story it's nicely written andd is interesting. kibosh is a funny word. |
| arirang 2007-08-06 ch 3, | abuseOoh, wow, this is really good--intriguing, fresh, and engaging. (Read: UPDATE VERY SOON!) ...Sorry, I'd give a longer review, but it's 2 in the morning and I need to sleep. =P |
| bagelmoo 2007-07-30 ch 3, | abuseAh, whose name is it? Oh man, I hate cliffhangers. And yet I love them so. Is this about seven women, or have we just not gotten to the men yet? Just curious. I'm a curious little bugger. Keep up the good work! |
| bagelmoo 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseI liked this chapter, but I don't like Ana as much as Nina. Although I am very interested to see how she got involved with the Bloods and all that nonsense. :) |
| Vcheugas 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseaww the poor little boy.. keep on posting i am having fun reading this story! |
| bagelmoo 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseUm, hi, loving this. You could probably write an entire story just on Nina, who, by the way, seems like she has an amazing story to tell. Well done! |
| Vcheugas 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseo update soon! i likey! :] |