I loved it, can't wait for more

Oh, the title of this really caught me, and the summary made me wonder just what kind of story this is going to turn in to...Camberley sounds like one really crepy school O_o

I like how the common room's colors are a kind of santuary away from the depressing atmosphere of the rest of the school. Can't wait to see where this is going!

Oh...interesting. I love how you're writing this in present tense; few writers do that because past is considered more professional or something. I also like your voice a lot. One itsy bitsy thing..."spite seemed to seep out of this girl's every PORE". Pour is a verb.

UPDATE SOON!

I have to say, it was very well written. I could clearly picture every event. Can't wait for another chapter!

-Squiggles

I liked it! Couldn't find any flaws in it. It does sound very interesting...I shalt come back for more. Hehehe...

But most of all, I think you made her seem like a likeable character. I got a good sense of her personality without the author burdening me with too many details. Nice job! *putting it on my alert list*


Oh, and if you don't mind, can you check out my story? It's called Choking on Rabbits. It's SLASH, but it's comedy, so I think you'll like it. Hope you enjoy!

-Ramen