It's interesting. It's based on that Teen Titans episode where they go inside Raven's mind, right? I liked that episode...

It might just be because I feel bad already and want to cry anyway, but, seriously, you have me on the verge of tears here. This girl is hurting so bad inside and all she can do is express it through her angry words willed with cursing. i feel so horrible for the main character, if i were them, I think I would of cracked already, especially after this girl...

Good work... can't wait until the next one.

and sorry if I sounded sarcastic, I'm sort of depressed at the moment...

my... that was interesting. deep breaths. LOL. this was very moving. i can't think of another way to put it. THis is a dark piece, with something to do with journeys and finding yourself, and my brain, as i read this, made all of the girls at the arches look like me, in thier varying states of sanity. I think that's what you intended, but i'm not sure. I'm very interested in where this will go. and also...

Are you alright?

Wow, that chick scares me. Anger anyone?

It would be scary to meet a girl like that, in literal form... I really love the metaphor(s) behind this series, of colours and arches and different types of girls. It's all very amazing.

Awe! This girl reminds of my friend! I want to hug her! and you! Darn... I wish I could see you one day, I'd run up to you and hug you and, and well, yeah, you rock! Keep it up!

I like this. It's so sad, but real. Keep writing this. I like to see what happens.

We're almost done? I hope she's right, that she can do it...
I'll have to wait for the ending. Nice writing.

*starts to cry* i just finished reading someone else's writing that put me on the verge of tears, and with this, you pushed me over the cliff, over the breaking point. This was beautiful, it reveals all that i believe about love. it's all there, expressed in your eloquent words. It was wonderful...

*smiles*

Need I say more? Ok, I know I do, I just like saying that.

So, I've finally read this and stopped being lazy because it's "just too long right now". Haha, sorry about that. I really like the concept. The different colors, the different emotions. The girl who keeps going, despite the weakness she feels. I like it. Is there going to be any more? Well, even if not, great job. God bless.

It's getting more hopeful, at least this one is. That's nice. Not that I minded the sorrowful earlier chapters. Great chapter.

This also sounds like me, but on a bad day. My name means 'to be strong' and so I don't really cry that often, I just keep it all inside until I reach my breaking point. when I get there, I begin to deny my name, and say that I'm not worthy of its meaning, that I'm weak. But I look back at the past and see all that I've been through and accomplished, and I smile. There's hope for me yet. I stand up and smile, I embrace the new day.

I like this girl. She reminds me of me. Hopeful but happy. Silly but distant. Thats me alright! I have a feeling youre going to continue discussing many personalities, but I'll decide completely when I finish the next chapter. Good work on what I've read so far though! ^_^

The feeling of being trapped is conveyed well here. Great chapter.

Interesting. I look forward to seeing where you're going with this. (Did that sound bad? I mean, I'm interested.)