|Reviews for Unforgiven|
| the truth beneath the rose 10/6/07 . chapter 1
So powerful, so emotional. It's raw and honest and unfortunately I can relate. I envy you.
| Stella Grimshaw 8/10/07 . chapter 1
Good use of italics, I really wish you wrote longer poems, you have such talent I'd love to see it just create a mural of words across the paper, you'd be able to do it.
| Chidori Nadare 8/2/07 . chapter 1
I feel like somebody is screaming their hearts out. So intense...Well done!
| Kissing Concrete 7/31/07 . chapter 1
WOW. that is honestly all I have to say. well maybe not. haikus are normally not my thing, but this one was literally DRIPPING with emotion and heart break and i love it. *favs*
| continuous brevity 7/30/07 . chapter 1
this was great, i love the italics and bolding you used. nice work.
| a silenced revolution 7/28/07 . chapter 1
Intense... good job.