What a heartfelt and emotional poem! It made me depressed when I was reading it. :( (*Not* a bad thing, I reassure you.) I like your use of formatting styles. Great job!

Wow, great poem! I liked the feeling of it!

Minako

Nice use of the different formatting styles.
Guess, things do come and go and nothing is permanent.
Things may past, but they do stay as memories - very true.
It's hard for us to forget.
I don't know about the dream. I mean it's hard to dream of something sometimes, especially the thing you want.
Anyhow. Cheers.

Wow...I can totally relate to that.

wow. I love this. it reminds me of when my greataunt died, this is kinda how I felt. Excellent job!