This is really great. I love the line "i'm sick/of my irises being old." That's just interesting and unique. The copier reminds me of working in an office in college. Wow. But yeah, I can see this whole thing, and it's just great. I love it. Keep writing! :)

So many amazing descriptions.

I didn't really get the summary or the title. It was interesting though.
The imagery was cool, but it didn't exactly get the meaning of it all either.
Interesting read nevertheless. Cheers.

the last two stanzas are my favorite. and those last two lines are perfect.