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Reviews For: My Poetry Book

XxsaraxmariexX
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abuseYou write the best dark poems :] I love them!

My favorites were Twinkle Twinkle Broken Star and Tortured Mind...I think you should get those 2 published one day because a lot of people can relate to your work.

Sara
NothingMoreNothingLess
2007-07-28
ch 11,
abuseIt's actually got the tune and everything. I've tried doing that, adding my own words to songs, but it never worked that well. "searching for a single spark..." Yup. This is really, really good.

Cassandra
NothingMoreNothingLess
2007-07-28
ch 8,
abuseI thought I had something like that. I'm not sure if it's still there or not... it seems like it sometimes, but others. *shrugs* It's a work in progress, I guess. This was good. You're lucky to have a friend like that.

Cassandra
NothingMoreNothingLess
2007-07-28
ch 3,
abuse"With hope and love
The pieces are set"

and...

"Gun so fair
Peace I find
Tragic end to my
Tortured Mind"

Those two part... just wow.

Cassandra
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