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Fall-Out-Love 2008-05-29 ch 31,	abuseThis story...is great. I'm loss for words
bookworm-lovingedward 2008-03-22 ch 27,	abuseOMFG! im like, crying so hard! this is an amazing story, i CANT WAIT To read the rest! sniff sniff, i just... i love ur characters so much! runs off and cries ur amazing!
Ashley LoserFace 2008-03-22 ch 31,	abuseGAHH. I LOVE IT. It's so cute. (: I'm seriously crazy for this story and, if you could tell from my favorites list, I don't fall for stories on this site too easily. As for the sequel, I read the first chapter and it was lovely. (: I can't believe I'm going to ask you this but.. PLEASE GIVE JAYDEN AND MICHAEL A HAPPY ENDING? I never ask for that. Ever. xD Normally, endings that don't turn out so well make the story much more entertaining. BUT.. you're an exception. (: Keep up the amazing work. I look forward to reading the updates. (:
True.Randomness 2008-03-05 ch 30,	abuseI was crying like nothing as soon as the epilogue started since the video for the song has such a tragic ending and the song itself makes me cry like nothing. I am so glad that Jayden didn't die in the end, and that they are building a future together. Also I wanted to tell you that your story was very well written. Nothing was rushed and none of the characters ever seemed out of place, except maybe Jayden’s mom, whose personality was all over the place. Also Mikey's mom too was a bit of an odd character and was very hard to tell if she was out of character. Sometimes too the story would seem 'awkwardly' written, but not often. Anyways, this was one hell of a good story in general and a sequel would be great. Though if you are going to write the sequel you have to be sure you actually want to so it won’t be bad or just be left unfinished. If you don't really want to write a sequel but have been requested a lot for one, then maybe you could do a compromise and write a sequel with no real plot but is more like a collection of one-shots that is centered in events in their lives that are both mushy and dramatic. Of course what you end up doing (or not doing) is fine since the ending is conclusive enough that it could be left alone and opened that the story could be continued.
Myloveforyou 2008-02-26 ch 30,	abuseThis was so amazing. I fell in love with your story, which I decided to read on a whim. You made me fall in love with your characters and at points I was scared to read on, not wanting to read one of their deaths, or the end of their relationship. You actually had tears running down my face, and I never cry, hell my eyes are still misty, and you gave us a happy ending. This stroy was just perfect. It makes me want to write a fanfic for the sequel, but I don't think I could ever capture your characters fully, your writing is just beyond the level I am at. I really hope you write a sequel. I tip my hat to you.
Aiden Morrison 2008-02-03 ch 30,	abuseI just finished your story and I have to say it's amazing. I absolutely loved it and I found myself getting so involved that I started shaking. I think I loved it so much because I could honestly relate to some things, such as the fact that I'm gay and I've used ecstasy in the past. You're an amazing writer, and your story has definitely been added to my favorites. I fell in love with both characters, and I even found myself tearing up at various parts. I say, you have to write a sequel. Do you understand how much I'd love you? Like, entirely. Thank you for sharing your story. I have not one complaint about it. I read all the chapters in one night. I've grown so fond of it that you just have to write a sequel. :] -Aiden
Zombification 2008-01-06 ch 30,	abuseNo. I am so sad. I loved this try so much. You should totally do a sequel. I always looked forward to reading this story. Sometimes I would forget about it because it took a while for new posts but when the story came into mind I got excited and rushed here. Anyway, hope to see more! Keep it up, you are a great writer. Uh... bye. :D
bored-me too 2008-01-02 ch 30,	abuseNO! (there was like over a hundred o's, even if it shows only one... -_-') I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! it was so sad! Mikey and Jayde's love is so amazing, and beautiful, and strong, I could feel it as I was reading this! it's just the most wonderful thing ever!! AND!! if there isn't a sequel, I'd be SO upset!! :( OH! I have an idea!! hehe! it's funny, but you don't have to use it at all! I just thought it was hilarious. lol, ok. so, as they are in college, they get hit on by a LOT by girls, right? but, there is this one CRAZY girl, and she goes all stalker on Mikey, and she puts a video camera in his dorm, (cuz she's a crazy stalker) and they don't obviously don't know, and they do some smooching, and what not, lol, and she FREAKS out, cuz she heard they were gay, but didn't believe it, but now that it's confirmed to her she gets all determined to turn Mikey's ways, dump Jayde, and have him fall madly in love with him. lol. and then Mikey calls the cops and puts a restraining order on her. :) lol, random thought! lol, just had to say it! ok, well, plz hurry with your stories! i wanna read the revision of this story! lol, :D anyway, Happy Day! LoTsoFLoVe♥ sincerely, - bored? -_-" me too
narcissistic 2007-12-31 ch 30,	abuseaw...thats all i can say cause its such a sweet ending...good job!
boyzarecrazy24 2007-12-30 ch 30,	abuseomg...its over cries i dont want it to be ova! it was so sad =/ haha yet so happy =]!! lol i luved it ubbers much!! omg u soo totally have to make a sequal or something! that would be soo fudging awesome =D plzplzpzlpzlzplzplzplplz lolol excellent writing and i luf jayden! haaha still do :DD i just wanted to let u know that i was totally with u and that this was probably one of the bestest story ive read =) congrats on finishing it even tho im sorta sad its ova... but omg make a sequal!! :DD 10/10 amazing
portabellaprincess 2007-12-30 ch 30,	abuseWow. Maybe in the rewrite/sequel maybe you can explain how Jayde's parents has come to terms or how they deal with their son's homosexuality? What happened to Mikey's family as well? Does he have any family at all left? Maybe in the sequel they could face temptations in college: drugs, alcohol, people hitting on them, maybe rape. I don't know.
Ramenluver 2007-12-22 ch 27,	abuseOh...can't wait to read the epilogue. :) I was listening to Enya-Only If, and it had a bit of a bittersweet effect. I'll read the rest later. We're going to see I Am Legend. I'll tell you how it is. -Ramen
Ramenluver 2007-12-22 ch 26,	abuseOh my gosh, you have me crying! I can't believe people can be so insensitive sometimes. Yah, I could see the change in your writing style. I kinda like it. -Ramen
Ramenluver 2007-12-22 ch 25,	abuseOh...crap. Well, for a minute there, I thought he was going to change his mind, but he swallowed it anyway... Please let this have a happy ending... -Ramen
Ramenluver 2007-12-22 ch 24,	abuseNo...he better not. I have crowbars and two x fours I'd be all too happy to threaten him with. But very wicked cliffie. But he better not! -Ramen

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