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| AkikoEtsuchou 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOhaw, the ending was so cute! And the two of them are great together. When Henry blew up at Trent, I was like, wait, what?! And then it was all good, yay! |
| Switch 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
| write_this_down 2007-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this story. Also, the afternote...I've been listening to Against Me! for over five years now, and they are still one of my favorites. You should definitely write some punk-infused stories. Looking forward to more stories, at any rate! |
| Maris. S 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseRather long one shot, but who am I to complain? lol Loved it of course~ As I usually do your work. I thought that it was rather sweet though. Henry is...special, but I love him anyways lol He just got the usual 'assume anything' moment that we usually all get (in regaurds of him thinking Trent was hiding something 'major' from him) Silly boy~ But I enjoyed this story =) |
| magalina 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseAWW! I was sure this was going to have a sad ending... really cute, loved it :D |
| AppLEaves 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseD: Not only is my pillow dirty, it's stinky now. >.> I really don't like this sadistic side of yours. P.S I'm saving up for that book of yours. ^^ Wooh. |
| My Chemical Music Box 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good! I liked how neither Henry or Trent were stereotypical or anything because there is too much stereotypical stuff out there and this is a nice reprieve! I really liked it! |
| Mya 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse*nudges* Sweetness, I learned a lesson from Henry...when you're about to get beat up, just compliment the person ^^ |
| Naomi Schemer 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, those pesky teenaged boys, not being eloquent and not understanding each other and such. Very cute. Over all, nice plot, nice characters, good story. I think this shall be deemed "The Summer Story of Summer 2007" by me. |
| nonaccount 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI saw Defying Gravity a couple years ago, it's no Beautiful Thing (but what is?) but it was still ok. Really sweet and mellow one-shot. I kept expecting the letters to soon turn into "Dear John" letters so I'm glad they didn't. Poor Trent I guess he was trying so hard to not let his "surprise" slip that he forgot to include the all-important word, "love" in his letter to his boyfriend 'cause obviously that's the turning point where things start to go south. The second to last line is my favorite in the way it conveys the easy gentleness of a long-term couple, "[e]ven still, a hand absently drifted out towards mine . . ." I love the tenderness. |
| paledaisy78 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseaw, this was cute. I loved it, partly because it IS so different from mostly everything you write. it was an awesome portrayal of young love at it's purest form. |
| Jangalian 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAh~ I always love everything you write XD; I think I say this in every review, especially for one-shots. But it's always true :D I find it a little funny that you've made so many characters that you're starting to repeat names, hah...like Michael. I think there was another one but I can't remember :/ Hm~ I thought this was really cute. I thought for sure either Trent or Henry would find someone else while Henry was in Maine XD; But I am glad they stayed together :D So, well. I can't think of much more to say ;o; Just, that, I loved this :D ♥ |
| Reigning Fyre 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting...I'm 17 soon to be 18 and when I was 16 I always imagined love like this. NIce to know that others do to. How would I go about commissioning you for a story? That, or would you be willing to help me write one of my own? Cause you know...you rock and all! 8D |
| Werehuntress 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely LOVED IT ! :) Keep up the good work :D |
| Kizuna 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAww, this was sweet!;) I'm glad it all ended good!:D |