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| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 13,  | abuserealy good chap! |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 12, | abuseDanny's gonna help her?? Aww, that's so cute! I actually started to like his character more than Max's, though knowing you, you have lots more twists! |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 10, | abuseI have no idea who she'd pick at this point. I'll just shut up and keep reading, then. |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 9, | abusegasp! |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 8, | abusewow. that's all I got to say |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 6, | abuseI would so love to do that in a mall! I do play jokes on people at the mall, but never something like that! You know what's fun? Playing truth or dare at the mall. Someone almost always ends up dancing on top a table in the food court. |
| insatiablehunger89 2008-07-04 ch 4, | abusegood story! I think you just earned yourself a place on my Fav Authors list! |
| ICantWaitUntilApril 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abusehahahah.this is SO cute! keep it up! -+*~ APRiL ~*+- |
| Khoownie 2008-05-07 ch 17, | abuseI love this great story.. ^_^ MAX made me crazy. woohh. ~`aly`~ |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-04 ch 17, | abuseAw that was cute. Nice job finishing it up :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseHaha, I love how she met Max. That's so adorable. I really liked this chapter but you had a few grammar things. Really minor so it's not of much importance. Awesome job on the chapter, I was cracking up during most of it. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was really interesting but I felt like the first part was kinda unneeded. However, the last part of the first chapter really made me want to read more. So... I'll go do that now :) |
| under the bed 2008-04-27 ch 17, | abuseI shouldn't have read all of this at once; it gave me indigestion from laughing too hard. I love love love it! Emphasis on the love! ^__^ |
| under the bed 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuse"DON'T SWEAR! IT'S ** RUDE!" ...I've said that before, but no one laughed. =[ Poor, unfunny me. |
| PrincessNancy 2008-03-22 ch 17, | abuseHahah hilarious totally awesome story! Hmm the epilogue rocked! Do I smell a sequel? *sniff sniff* XoXo NAN! |