I think a lot of people could learn a lot by reading this piece. Many need to stop and think...Amercia had its arms out for them too. Anyhow, I love your poem it sounded as though it come from the heart. Beautifully done! Excellent work!! God Bless you and God Bless our country "America" as well! Write on.

You did a great job on this poem. It represents the hardships and obstacles that immigrants go through to get here, though, as you said, it's worth it for them, in the end.
God Bless.

~Kat