|Reviews for Chocolate|
| BloomingFlower-asn 3/24/10 . chapter 1
This was brilliant. But in my opinion, it was a little too brilliant! The images that you portrayed were excellent but I could not identify the connection between the tones of the piano and the sweet sensation of chocolate! But that's just my opinion. It was amazing nonetheless!
* asn *
| HiddenFromYou 3/24/10 . chapter 1
I like the imagery you have going here. It's very strong, and paints a clear picture of what you mean.
Having said that, I didn't really see the link from the image to that of chocolate, bar the last two lines and, at a stretch, the first one.
It's also a very dark poem, whereas chocolate is usually viewed as something good and pure. I think you need to extend it a little. Explain your meanings and thoughts behind the imagery.
| Erlkoenigin 5/14/09 . chapter 1
I can almost smell it!
| MoRcY 4/11/09 . chapter 1
I like this, Its so...epic.
| chatixrawrr 11/15/07 . chapter 1
I like this one. It's very good.