wattpad is a great website for writers because most writers that has been plagiarized before leave fictionpress and went there,you can't copy works there unlike just inform your readers here if you want to go to wattpad. okay ? .

i didn't read your crash and burn.i don't have time to before but now i do but then i saw your update in my email and you removed your thanks for sharing your stories here.

great story love it

I liked this story a lot even though it needs major editing :). Just some suggestions for your re-write...Maybe you can build your characters a little bit more or have a few scenes with Quinn and Jolene about the purpose for taking out Ty. Just make it more well-rounded. It's fine how it is if you just wanted to take out spelling and grammar and little thing like that, but I think this has the potential to be awesome :)! That is just my opinion.

I'm liking this story. Seems like a cool story line. I really do hope you can find the time to edit/re-write this though. :)

Ah, what a wonderful story. I feel like I'm reading all your story in this one day. Lostinthenightrain marathon. lol. Thanks for the woderful story and and creations that you put on here. You are a very talented writer tahnks!

Hey - that was a nice little story. You should revisit it someday, do a bit of editing and adding - flesh it out a bit wtih some description and extra explanations. It has potential.

i really liked it! sequel?

I loved it )

That was so sweet! I feel bad for Ty, being in the dark. If you haven't already, you should totally read the Mercy Thompson series by Patricia Briggs. You would love it! Well...at least the first one, Moon Called, I think. The second one's good too, but the first was better. Keep on writing like this!

-James )

this story is well done. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work.

Great ficcy! Really love your plot and characters... but the grammer needs some serious work, and you could be a little clearer on some points.

I'm not trying to be picky or anything, but you could really use a beta reader or something to help you with grammer and clarity. It would make your story so much better. Really.

So, over all an AWESOME story in need of a very small amount of tweaking!

I hope you write more stories like this!

I demand an epilogue! You know I love you too much to force you to write but still, where is the epilogue?

I'm not normaly one for werewolf stories but I'm liking this :D Keep it up!