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Reviews For: Garou Moon: A Werewolf Story

Freddy Teddy
2008-06-24
ch 8,
abuseThat was so sweet! I feel bad for Ty, being in the dark. If you haven't already, you should totally read the Mercy Thompson series by Patricia Briggs. You would love it! Well...at least the first one, Moon Called, I think. The second one's good too, but the first was better. Keep on writing like this!
-James =)
Estelin
2008-04-13
ch 8,
abusethis story is well done. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work.
Lyra Waterflame
2007-07-31
ch 8,
abuseGreat ficcy! Really love your plot and characters... but the grammer needs some serious work, and you could be a little clearer on some points.

I'm not trying to be picky or anything, but you could really use a beta reader or something to help you with grammer and clarity. It would make your story so much better. Really.

So, over all an AWESOME story in need of a very small amount of tweaking!

I hope you write more stories like this!
Muffins Have Hearts Too
2007-07-30
ch 8,
abuseI demand an epilogue! You know I love you too much to force you to write but still, where is the epilogue?
Muffins Have Hearts Too
2007-07-29
ch 2,
abuseI'm not normaly one for werewolf stories but I'm liking this :D Keep it up!
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