LUV IT!...disturbed by it...enthralled by it...STILL LUV IT!

no lies...you are a beautiful person with flaws just like the rest of us...some scars are just more visible than others i suppose.

oh and the lie?...i'm pam anderson's identical twin sister..and my boobs aren't fake! they is home grown baby! -

(Thanks for the review)

This poem is beautiful. It's short but very powerful. I love the breathe/suffocate bit at the end, and that you say outright that the hope is a lie.