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| Clarelouise 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseaw i feel so sorry for her! i can really empathise with her even though ive never been in a situation like that, you write so vividly! its really good the way she has a horrible father but then theres her mum whos someone who loves her, its good cause it captures the situation without making you feel depressed if that makes sense! x |
| Aomera 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuselozzy this is beautiful and i understnad you. you have a wonderful way of expressing emotions thorugh varying characters, i wasnt gonna read this but got hooked! i wont read the other bianca one, will safe it till after holiday, need to pack! x love youx |